reen16 ([info]reen16) wrote,
@ 2009-06-26 23:37:00
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My SPN Poems: Study , Screaming Inside

 



Study 

 

Sam studied Dean more then any subject in school

or lore about Demons and Monsters

He knew every habit , every routine

He looked to him for answers.


Sam wondered if he knew that even though they've grown 

Dean would always be his heart 

But his brother must have always known 

because Dean studied Sam from the start.

 

 

 

 

 

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Screaming Inside (sam POV)

 

Every time I fall asleep 

I dream of things that crawl and creep

Of things I've done and ones I've lost

Of things I've seen and lines I've crossed

But I no longer toss and turn

I guess its because I finally learned

that this is what my life became

and when I wake I'll see the same

Dean wont be awakened by my screams

when I know the worst of my nightmares are the best of his dreams

Until my tongue become untied 

I'll Toss and turn and scream Inside







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[info]ckll
2009-06-27 08:47 am UTC (link)
Sam wondered if he knew that even though they've grown
Dean would always be his heart

Dean wont be awakened by my screams
when I know the worst of my nightmares are the best of his dreams

Amazing!!

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[info]lovetheguys
2009-06-27 12:07 pm UTC (link)
These are excellent. You write wonderful poetry. I'm sure there must be a place for you to share these with others, but I don't know where.

Love, Robin

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[info]nerthus
2009-06-27 02:26 pm UTC (link)
Whoa, those are really good; I especially like the second one, it's so visceral and raw and powerfully intense.

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[info]biggelois
2009-06-27 04:51 pm UTC (link)
Very good! I like teh second one in particular. The feeling of helpless acceptance and the notion of something worse waiting around the next corner.

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[info]yaya_wr8t3r
2009-06-28 02:47 am UTC (link)
They are both really good. The second one is really well written, it screams Sam. I also love the picture of Jared there. Wonderful job :) ... keep it up!

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[info]reen16
2009-06-28 05:57 pm UTC (link)
aw thanks u guys. Im so glad u liked them. thanks for all the feedback :D

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[info]jjinmo_356
2009-07-06 10:13 pm UTC (link)
Just speechless it was that good.....

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